I would personally introduce the MC through another mean than his dialogue with Alice as a first part. Then have "in another part of town" or something like that displayed either in full screen or in one of the corner, then have the rest of the game as you wrote it.
Also, maybe add "male protagonist" in the tags.
I'm just saying because curently the start is a bit confusing, wich may be something you wanted, if so don't mind me.
I recon the scenes are in chronological order, i'm just saying i'd introduce the MC earlier in the game.
At first i thought i'd play as the guy in hoody we see coming to witness the blond scene and my only options were to either watch her get raped or skip the content without the option to intervene. The inability to intervene while a girl gets raped might lessen your audimat and it's the very first scene of the game as things are. Here there is no reason for that to happen except confusion (although some might be turned off by rape as a whole, to each their own i guess).
Then i thought maybe the MC is the blond girl (wich would have been a problem to me cause i don't dig that, that breaks immersion to me). Turns out neither are the MC and the MC is not even aware that this scene happens. So i thought it was a good idea to mention my concerns to you. Then again that's just my honnest opinion. Other than that keep up the good work i'm curious to know what happens next.
wait a minute is the whole movie scene thing just a response to this post? I am not sure if I should be annoyed or rolling on the floor laughing. I think I am going to go with the latter. You rock dude.
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I wasn't offered the option to buy version "0.2.0-pc.zip" is it normal?
Will this have a android port?
What fetishes does this game have
I would personally introduce the MC through another mean than his dialogue with Alice as a first part. Then have "in another part of town" or something like that displayed either in full screen or in one of the corner, then have the rest of the game as you wrote it.
Also, maybe add "male protagonist" in the tags.
I'm just saying because curently the start is a bit confusing, wich may be something you wanted, if so don't mind me.
Other than that this seems interresting.
Scenes placed in time order.
Evening (blonde scene and also a reason to dialog with Alice) - Night (dialog with Alice) - Morning (MC wakes up) - And so on.
I think the start is a bit confusing exactly because the game is in an early state and things will be cleared up later.
p.s. Can't add more than 10 tags.
I recon the scenes are in chronological order, i'm just saying i'd introduce the MC earlier in the game.
At first i thought i'd play as the guy in hoody we see coming to witness the blond scene and my only options were to either watch her get raped or skip the content without the option to intervene. The inability to intervene while a girl gets raped might lessen your audimat and it's the very first scene of the game as things are. Here there is no reason for that to happen except confusion (although some might be turned off by rape as a whole, to each their own i guess).
Then i thought maybe the MC is the blond girl (wich would have been a problem to me cause i don't dig that, that breaks immersion to me). Turns out neither are the MC and the MC is not even aware that this scene happens. So i thought it was a good idea to mention my concerns to you. Then again that's just my honnest opinion. Other than that keep up the good work i'm curious to know what happens next.
The jab about chronological order and secondary character was fun. Well played.
wait a minute is the whole movie scene thing just a response to this post? I am not sure if I should be annoyed or rolling on the floor laughing. I think I am going to go with the latter. You rock dude.
This is really cool so far! Looking forward to its progress!